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DeviantDead Round One is officially over, looks like you'll get to see even more of Eoin and Q in zombie apocalypse nightmare land! Good for you?
The judges were awesome enough to give us all a little bit of critique on what we need to work on. I must say, I am
very happy with the critiques I got because it's exactly what I had expected (and wanted) to hear. I spend a lot of my audition and first round pages working on drawing people, background settings, and story pacing. Especially story. *
BeatGuy and I worked and re-worked the plot, going from an initial 30 or so pages and bringing it down to 12, while still keeping the important character and plot elements. It was difficult, but very very fun and quite rewarding in the end! This has been the longest comic I've drawn and completed. Ever. LOL.
As for what I need to work on, the judges are absolutely right- I saw it coming from a mile away. Making the panels and action pop out at the reader. Varying camera angles, etc. That can really help bring out the focus of each frame and give the story a more cinematic read. This is going to be tricky, but also superfun to work on. I love crazy camera angles, so it'll be good to work on that.
SO, in summary, we succeeded at what we'd planned to do- write a good story and show good character development. This was my main concern and I'm so glad it came across well in the comic. Now to work more on the
other stuff.Also, MAJOR PROPS to our opponent ~
xX-blackwing-Xx for writing a very fun and interesting comic. His art style is lively and fun and he actually has some crazy twists in his story, it was very entertaining! And thanks Blackwing for being so awesome throughout the tourney, you're a great supportive guy with a lot of talent. Keep up the amazing work, you have some wonderful ideas and good art to back them up. I look forward to seeing more from you.

And lastly, thanks to my friends and fans for sticking around through this. I'm sure you guys get BORED of seeing the same characters over and over, so my apologies. I appreciate all the commentary and feedback I've been getting- even if you leave THE DUMBEST COMMENTS EVER ugh guys really, but I still love you. C:

Don't take me too seriously, you know I'm just foolin' with ya~
So now it's time to take a little breather over the holiday. Round Two will start in January and
who knows what THAT will bring on. D8

